Second Draft for my Radio Advertisement

“Hello I’m Jenny, I’m 17 years old and suffer from anxiety. It started off gradually I suppose, I’m a little larger than the rest of my friends,  and I hated going out in large groups of people, where I knew I was going to bump into someone, I hated the way that I looked and eventually became dependant on staying indoors. Then my mum bought my Teen Unique magazine, it taught me all about being comfortable in my own skin and being happy by accepting who I am, so now I’m going to a party with my friends next weekend and I can’t wait! Slowly but surely I’m gaining my confidence back thanks to Teen Unique. Teen unique available March 20^th in all major retailers and off licences.”

This is the second draft of the speech for my radio advertisement. The length is 34 seconds.