“I love the concept of
the magazine, I think that it is really inspiring and such a good idea to do a
magazine on encouraging confidence in teenage girls, society forgets how
vulnerable we really are and its encouraging for us to have a voice” – Sarah
age 14
“I really like the
layout of this magazine, I think it looks really professional. The front cover
is really nice the way the colours go together and the fact that the model isn’t
really wearing lots of makeup it is refreshing to see that on the front of a
magazine” – Lola age 13
“The magazine looks
really good, I’m happy to see a double page spread on such a good campaign, the
article has really opened my eyes about wearing as much makeup as I do, and it
has shown me that everyone is beautiful” - Marissa age 16
“The layout of the contents
page is really good, the only thing I would change is adding a bit more colour
to the text, maybe red to go with the colour of the girl’s top. It was nice to
see a magazine encouraging girl’s confidence for a change” – Pippa age 17
“I like the fact that
the front cover is not over crowded with information, it gives more attention
to the articles being advertised. It is refreshing to see a front cover not
airbrushed it really shows off the models natural beauty” - Lucy age 15
“The front cover and
double page spread look really professional, the only thing that’s not as good
is the contents page, it’s still really good but the text is too large in
certain places. But I like the editors not at the bottom, it makes it feel more
personal like she is talking to me directly” – Ellie age 13
“The front cover does
look a bit bare, personally if it was me I would have the model a little
further back with more room for text to be added, but it still looks good, if
it was a real magazine I would definitely buy it” - Samantha age 17
“The double page
spread is my favourite part, I love the way it is set out, it looks really
professional, it is so nice to see girls without any makeup on in a magazine
for a change, the contents page looks a little over crowded but it still looks
good” – Jess age 14
“The pictures on the
double page spread are nice but if they had been arranged differently they
would be more effective, but the layout of the text is really good, I think it
looks really professional and is a good idea of the theme of the magazine” – Kate
age 13
“I really like this
magazine, it looks professional full of the right content that is relevant to
us as teenagers. The front cover is eye catching and I think by not having lots
of text on there more attention is paid to the text that is on there, the
contents page looks good, they only thing I would change is maybe having some
different colour font, but the black works really well against the white, the
double page spread is my favourite part, there is a reoccurring theme of black
text and the message throughout the magazine that gives it that overall professional
look, feel and effect. I would buy this magazine” – Amanda age 16
These comments on my magazine are reasonably good and
positive, I’m glad my target audience have said they like the idea behind my
magazine, the comments are also very similar when it comes to my contents page,
for example a few have said maybe adding more colour, this is something I do
agree with however I think the black works better and all the colour is
therefore on the image getting more attention.
To look further into what my target audience think about my
magazine I have asked the following 3 questions and put the responses into pie charts so that the feedback is clearly presented.
I am very happy with the responses given to my 3 questions,
the answers show that the majority of my target audience asked would purchase
this magazine and that it targets them directly, also that their favourite page
was the double page spread, this is good because that is the main focus of the
magazine as it is the part that will help them to boost their confidence.
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